Very good, but I don't think that posting test on newgrounds is best place to do this, since its not really a movie, which is probably why it didn't get much good feedback. If this is for a game, I would recommend posting on GameJolt. If this is just for fun, then I would make lots of these and combine them into one animation reel, but don't put this one by itself, because YouTube favor watch time, not views, so not many people would get to see it. That stuff aside, I think that this very amazing animation. Great Job!